I looked at the sky for some inspiration but all I could see was a crow hovering above my head with malicious intentions. I pondered, ‘Will I be able to write something today or at least copy someone else’s work?’ Suddenly a divine voice emanated, “Try that 55 word thingy, dude.” And hence, this masterpiece.
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About Debajyoti
Ah! The enlightenment, at last! Did it visit you under a tree or was it on the slippery slopes of Indivine? Now, I am in a good mood to shamelessly copy your idea now. I am sure you won’t be able to point even your small finger at me! The best I have ever read!
hahahaha, i would like to dedicate this post to my quest for pageviews, votes, indirank etc etc. i am not going to point my finger at you because i learnt about this 55 word thing from all my blogger friends or rather copied the idea from them.
Why didn’t I think of this… very innovative and 55.
because i can shamelessly write anything to get few visitors. let’s see if i get few votes.
That was my first 55 word comment!
and i have crosschecked. it is indeed
Haha, you write a F55 about F55. Ingenious
.. Even I wrote one do check it out 
http://nehasjournal.blogspot.in/2012/06/scream-flash-55.html
i have read and commented, but yours is an actual 55 word fiction unlike mine
. hey thanx a lot. wasn’t expecting any comments on this one 
Hi Debajyoti
Every statement uttered would be a cockamamie one(now did i spell it rt? ) to someone or the other eh? Dunno what categories your blogs fit into but I always enjoy my visit here…Its not easy to make people laugh and you do it beautifully
yes, you have spelt it correctly, i have checked. even i was not sure about the category but i thought lemme just put it somewhere, who will question me. btw, why did you laugh at my work?
hey listen i will publish my next post in 2-3 days time. please come back and read that one. now lemme see if i get few votes
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Yes IT IS!
Great idea Deb:)in the garb of 55 simple words!
i was getting bored and wanted to publish something just for fun (and pageviews). but then i take hell lot of time to write a post, so this is all i could come up with. i never thought anyone will comment on this post
. thank you so much for that 
Ultimate !!! really enjoyed the cartoon- the old haggard indeed has the drunk look o_O !!!
hahahaha, yes, he has! but the cartoon is not mine
Wow.. are you trying to say that I bore you. By coming over too much here when ihave my own blog.
He he he what a innovative idea but then again for those who are good in 55 fiction someone like me can’t do that either…
hahaha. blogsphere is fun and lively because of guys like you. my blog won’t survive if you guys stop visiting
it was just a timepass thing shhhhhhhhhhhh……… I have absolutely no clue what 55 fiction is
goodness! hahhaa..
I loved this!
hey thank you so much. just wanted few pageviews
Come to think of it. Innovative, interesting and brilliantly crafted.
you are being too kind with your words. i published it out of boredom.
thank you so much for the comment
So you can do the short and witty as well! Is there no end to your talent for humour:) (Not that I want any end to it…).
Why 2-3 days, Debs? I am off on a trek on 4th and shall be out of action till 20th. Can’t you make it sooner?:)
hahaha, this is just a stupid post but thanks for the comment.
you have fun, enjoy your trekking. once you come back, i will force you to read all pending posts
. however, i wouldn’t want you to read the next one because that will be a nasty post oozing with negativity, which a nice person like you wouldn’t enjoy reading. i saw your posts on indivine, will read them tomorrow. i was sleeping the entire day 
Awesome
imaginative!
thank you so much. glad you liked it
Ha Ha Ha… This is great. Liked it so much.
hey, thanks a lot. glad you liked it
Had a blast looking at the cartoon. Wish blogging was so…. east
haha thank you so much. glad you liked it
Lovely. Copying the post RIGHT NOW. Loved your post BTW. Very meta.
hahahaha, thank you so much and please go ahead. we need to create a niche in the 55 word fiction segment
Aah! Divinity!
Have tried it myself – just wasn’t blatantly honest about it
thank you for the comment. there is a little dearth of it on this post. although it was just for some timepass but i do want comments for everything that i publish
try again. try try again
Wah, a masterpiece indeed! Very creative, Deb! It’s the best 55 fiction I have ever read
Loved that cartoon too, BTW. Where did you find it?
Keep blogging
thank you so much. well, i wanted some activity on my blog so just published this stupid post.
the source of the cartoon is mentioned at the bottom although it was there on multiple sites.
thanks again
What an idea, sir ji ! You are my inspiration !
great post !
Hey, thank you so much Vimla. inspiration? please don’t embarrass me
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An inspired masterpiece of a post, Imust say. It reminds me of the time I used to pester my grandfather for a story as a child. Who would always tell me this story: “Ek tha raja, ek thi rani. Dono mar gaye. Khatam kahani.”
And he would pack me off to some other adult willing to tell me a story.
well, allow me to explain. i was writing a post for several days (am still writing) and i knew i will not be able to complete it in near future. i also knew that no one would question me for writing few stupid lines and submitting it on indivine. so for the sake of visitors, votes and indirank, i submitted this. and now i can see few comments as well, finally. i am so happy now
thank you so much for the comment and now i am sending you to other blogs; they will tell you some story
seriously, that’s plagiarism!
can i copy it too? lol
hahaha. please go ahead
and thank you so much for the comment
Very smart, very Intelligent and very quick instead!
You inspired me to try the same..lets see if i succeed or my writer’s block takes over me, yet again!
i was too confused and was in a hurry to submit something and didn’t know what to write.
thank you so much for the comment and please write that. we will have a new kind of 55 word fiction
lol ! enjoyed
really i did …. it good to let yourself loose sometimes… you never know when you end up with a masterpiece … 
thank you so much. glad you liked it
. i do such stupid things frequently 
So, I see the 55 bug finally bit you…. welcome to the dark side
oh, i am going to do these more often
. it’s all bright side here 
. hahahaha, i am so cool 
And the flow of thoughts happen. A 55 talking about 55, how cool is that!
is it cool? i thought people will laugh at me and inditeam will delete my profile for abusing the idea of 55 word fiction
. but if you guys are saying it’s ok then i will continue to write these till my profile is deleted. hey thanks a lot for the comment 
He hee!! You’re brilliant. That is such a cool post.
Looking forward to more 55s from you. (btw, I hope that crow spared you)
Gosh, looks like I’m the last one to visit this space. Believe me, if I’m missing from the blogosphere for a few days, I’ll make sure to come and check out what I missed on factsandnonsense.
this is one supercool comment. thanks a lot Nambiar!! i was not getting comments on this post but now after i reply back to your comment, i will at least have 50. thank you so much for that.
if you are missing from blogsphere, i will make sure i send you the links of all the posts of mine that you missed
I like that idea.
. I really do enjoy your work.
hey thanks a lot Nambiar. you are supercool
Nautanki!!! And still fun
yes i am nautanki
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thanks for the comment. hey, i left couple of comments on your blog. do you really check the comment section?
Very Witty
thank you so much
you call this a 55er?? I am sorry but it didn’t even make me laugh.. unless its a joke on the concept. Hope you can write some better ones in the future…
it’s neither a joke on the concept nor intended to make anyone laugh. it was just for some pageviews and i am getting it, thank you
having said that, it actually made few people smile. isn’t it better than a sick, unwarranted comment.
i have just checked your blog and i can totally understand the reason why you are so frustrated otherwise why would someone get angry with a post
one more thing. please avoid my blog. there is no place for negativity here.
and by the way, i have deleted your link. you don’t want my nice and innocent visitors to click on your link out of curiosity. do you
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55 words. Now thats innovative. Awesome!
hey thank you so much. this is just a stupid post which i shouldn’t have published. but thanks a lot for the comment
before i got to the blog, i was wondering how you would fit in a story in 55 words. Now I know! brilliant!
hahaha. no it was just for fun. there are people who write these 55 fictions really well. thanks for the comment
Kudos Deb. Hillarious. Where do you get these ideas dude..? Let me copy from you. Wil try out soon.
Well, did you read my first night experience..?check out my blog
will check out your blog. haven’t read too many posts of late. thanks for the comment and please go ahead with your version of 55 word fiction
Loving these comic strips
Exact 55 words? Can be quite a challenge I am guessing!
thanks but this image is not mine. 55 words? well, no big deal; just add some unnecessary words, that’s it. your 55 word story is ready.
awesome!!!
this one simply rocks!!!
hey thanks Rahul and I am going to visit your blog tonight and finish all backlog. i am ashamed of myself.
hey that’s ok Deb… don’t force yourself .. it should come naturally .. just because i post comments on your blog does not mean you have to repay back with comments ..
if you like any blog of mine , a read of it will be more rewarding for me than the comment
my love for your blog will not cease irrespective of the visits you give my blog !
have a happy weekend!!!
rahul
ha ha ha. no it’s not about forcing myself. i forget to check out the blogs which i love. i do keep a tab on your blog and what’s happening in your life. and it’s not repaying back with exact number of comments that you post here but as a friend, i should have few words to say every time you publish a post, just like how in real life we would like to know what’s happening in our friends’ lives. you like it or not, i am going to visit your blog tonight and post comments
I somehow missed this. hehe..funny..I liked the cartoon..:P
oh, even i forgot about this one. thanks for the comment, the cartoon is not mine though
Good one
Now that’s what we call creativity!
thank you so much!!
oh okie, it’s an old post. no creativity. just wanted to publish something for traffic
What happens when you have an overdoze of intelligence with humour…humintelligence. That is exactly what you are…………hmintelligent!
thank you so much for this wonderful comment. but i don’t consider myself intelligent